Alex, Good lighting on all of the photos, even on the first one with the light coming from the laptop. I think for your environment photo maybe switching the position of the camera could've added a little more detail. You have painting or photo on the wall you could've made sure was in the shot or maybe an over the shoulder picture showing what you do on your laptop. A lot of the background is static and doesn't give much detail into you. Your document photo is good and focused. If you turned the camera vertically and your face filled the frame more I think would've been better. I really like your psychological one, what mindset does one have while playing or what release does it cause. The lines on the guitar brings you into the photo. You also look very sad in this photo which makes me looking at it wonder, what song you were playing or the mood of the song. I still think you could've done a better job at the framing of the photo, the brown of the guitar almost blends with the color of the couch, while your blue shirt separates its. Good job! - Erin
Alex,
ReplyDeleteGood lighting on all of the photos, even on the first one with the light coming from the laptop. I think for your environment photo maybe switching the position of the camera could've added a little more detail. You have painting or photo on the wall you could've made sure was in the shot or maybe an over the shoulder picture showing what you do on your laptop. A lot of the background is static and doesn't give much detail into you. Your document photo is good and focused. If you turned the camera vertically and your face filled the frame more I think would've been better. I really like your psychological one, what mindset does one have while playing or what release does it cause. The lines on the guitar brings you into the photo. You also look very sad in this photo which makes me looking at it wonder, what song you were playing or the mood of the song. I still think you could've done a better job at the framing of the photo, the brown of the guitar almost blends with the color of the couch, while your blue shirt separates its. Good job! - Erin